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In the beginning you give us too much credit in assuming we know what the war bond office is and why they keep posters of your man inside. FOr all we know they're all the same. And are they wanted posters? Why're they chasing him? I'd make sure to give us more information.Good key frames on the walk in the next section but it takes a long time to resolve (or start the chase for the matter.).